Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Story/Narrative Writing

Hey Students! Looking forward to your great story ideas that we have been working on this week!

Don't forget you can still post your opinion essay to the blog and comment on the ones that have been posted.

Monday, January 4, 2010

Don't Be Sobby Have a Hobby

Opinion essay
Poni lejukole
December1,2009

Don’t be sobby have a hobby!

Do you have an after school hobby? If you don’t you should get one.

They are a great benefit for you. You have been bored in your life

more than once. It’s agonizing sitting there wondering what am I

going to do today. Well what are you wanting for, Come on and get

energized! Here is why you need a after school hobby.

One reason is it totally passes time. You know when you come

After school, and you are bored, then you do your homework. Now you

Have the rest of the day. What do you do? Here is a tip. “Don’t be

bored.” By Poni Lejukole. “Read It!” Just kidding, but really. I do some

giant frisbee with friends and before I knew it, it’s dinner time! Try to

use it wisely.

Numero dos reason is it stops you from watching too much T.V.

Everybody loves watching T.V! Not always is it good for you. It’s

actually bad to watch all day. My friends and I were glued to the T.V.

one day. After that our eyes were strained. We all felt lazy. Not a very

good hobby to me. Don’t ever have that feeling.

Last one. It keeps you fit. I usually play soduku after school,

Then some basketball and frisbe. It keeps me healthy and strong. It’s

good to avoid sitting and eating. Doing something outside is good for

you. Like they say ”You need an hour of exercise a day.” So why not stay

fit have fun.

Those are my reasons why kids need after school hobbies. You

might think I don’t need that. I just like doing my homework. This is

still a good thing to do. You might go jogging, stretching, even

basketball, Every kid gets bored so why not have a after school hobby.

It would be a fun time for you and your friends so get moving!